Comments on my novel so far...?

Constructive criticism welcome. Heres the link: http://worthyofpublishing.com/book.asp?b...
Comments on my novel so far...?
send me the PDF please


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Comments on my novel so far...?
it's a little bit unoriginal for my taste, but it's very descriptive and has good potential =]
Reply:I love it completely and im only in chapter 3.


Keep it going!


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Reply:are you not afraid someone will copy your idea?