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Sunday, October 11, 2009

How can i re word this Thesis statement for my essay so it makes more sense. Please take a look Thank you!?

How do you think i can re word this so it makes more sense





In Angelou's poem "Harlem Hopscotch" and Dunbar's poem "Sympathy," both poet's backround affect their use of imagery to depict the struggles of an African American in a prejudice society.
How can i re word this Thesis statement for my essay so it makes more sense. Please take a look Thank you!?
I think it sounds fine the way it is actually, I would just suggest using *backgrounds (plural) instead of background.





So unless you have been asked to reword it, I think it sounds fine as it is.
How can i re word this Thesis statement for my essay so it makes more sense. Please take a look Thank you!?
The background of struggling African Americans in a prejudicial society has an impact on the imagery of the poets Angelou and Dunbar, for their poems "Harlem Hopscotch" and "Sympathy".





This is the best I could do, and make some sense to me.

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2 comments:

  1. RachelNovember 29, 2009 at 2:45 PM

    U might want to say it like this

    In both Angelous' poem "Harlem Hopscotch" and Dunbar's poem "sympathy", imagery is used to illustrate the struggles of African Americans in a perjudice society.

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  2. TeraNovember 29, 2012 at 3:32 PM

    How do I rephrase this quote:Teachers need to understand the affordances of assessments for students’ learning; however, educators need to be critical readers of the texts and procedures that aim to promote literacy while at the same time regulating literacy practices.

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