I have this story, but do you like it?

I have this story that i wrote, it was supposed to be a a sequel to the headless horseman, but now i turned it into something else, its about a detective who goes to new york to investigate a crime. A serial killer escaped from prison and is wreaking havok in a small town, so the detective tries to stop him, at the same time the detectives wife is there also investigating a sort of plague, or a virus that is infecting the small town also. Do you think its good so far?
I have this story, but do you like it?
I think it's so much action in one book and it's all very random. I don't get how someone wreaking havoc on a town couldn't be enough. A plague, wouldn't that get rid of a lot of people already?





You'd have to go into a lot of detail and pulling it off would be kind of difficult, but if you could, who knows where it could lead.





Good luck!
I have this story, but do you like it?
I think it's too much. You've got a serial killer AND the plague. Pick one or the other. And spell "havoc" right if someone's going to be wreaking it. :-)
Reply:You make it sound so done before.
Reply:It could be very good. The idea is very full, but that should be fine all depending on how it is written.

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