For people who enjoy reading and editing stories...?

I often write on my own for fun, and i have gotten into writing a story based on my freshman year of high school. Unfortunately, i have read it over and over again and having lived through it once already, I am unable to look at the story from a different perspective to edit it. If you are interested in reading it and giving useful criticism, PLEASE EMAIL ME THROUGH YAHOO ANSWERS and I will send you the first few pages. Thank you everyone!
For people who enjoy reading and editing stories...?
email it to me at ducky12593
For people who enjoy reading and editing stories...?
My E-mail is LilFroggyDude664@aim.com
Reply:I would like to help my email is silverstar765@yahoo
Reply:Okay, I don't mind. I'll send u an email with my email in it.