To anyone who answered my previous ?......?

to anyone who answered this ?


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could you please give me some feedback and criticism on the plot-line and maybe an e-mail so i can e-mail you the chapters as i go through them?..
To anyone who answered my previous ?......?
I'm not good at pointing out something that needs work, usually I just like it all, but if you want, I'd look at them.
To anyone who answered my previous ?......?
I'll help you out if you like. my email is silverstar765@yahoo.com
Reply:I didn't answer your last one, but I read what its about, WOULD YOU PLEASE SEND ME THE CHAPTERS!! you dont have to, but please. my email is inguana.cheeks@hotmail.com-thankyou


oh and maybe for a title to you last one...Blood thirsty? Or blood driven? Or something. Im not good at the titles, but i could help with the story:D
Reply:I read your last question.





At first I was like, 'Aww geez, another vampire story.' Then I realized that some of the characters in the story I'm working on are vampires themselves, so I take it back. I guess vampires are just too good to not use in a story. =D





I don't mind reading your story as you go along and I'd love to


criticise your work. Me email is: katoshi16@yahoo.com.au
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